Dear editors: When we say we want strong female heroines we don't mean gun slingers (although that's nice)we mean woman with personal strength and conviction. Giving us a sissy who can fight is not helping. Plus the negative character development- she's irritating in the beginning, kind of cool in the middle, then irritating again at the end- gave me whiplash. Plus this fabulous character development was also turned over to the guys. Why on earth does the character not wonder about the fact that she falls in love with the first man she meets after running from the murder of her parents? And the falling in love with the murderer? And then being torn about it all in the one week that you've had since said murder? Sweetheart, you need to take a break and get some counseling. Plus, both of those guys are douchebags. Just saying.