Wow that was....aweful. Delsol's wit and easy to read style could not rescue Flock from turning into a FUBAR. The tension between the characters was contrived, the plot meandered between unclear to non-existant, and the ending.... Oh my gosh. Not only were the last fifty pages a collection of two-five page climaxes but the main character gets the powers stripped from her and her boyfriend, transferred to her best friend, and it's a "good thing".
Obviously I'm a little bitter. On a more reasonable note I would probably say that it was an interesting ending, but not one that I felt was true to the characters or the world that Delsol created.